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Thursday, June 28, 2018

The Case of the Missing Chromebooks by Darrel Zhou, Aiden Schmidt, and Kevin Samey,

FYI: MAKE YOUR OWN NAMES

OPENING SCENE: ROBBERS

(Both robbers collecting chromebooks)


ROBBER 1: {Collecting Chromebooks} Hey, (ROBBER 2), how many will we get?


ROBBER 2: {Collecting Chromebooks} As much as you can.


ROBBER 1: {Facing ROBBER 2, stammering} B-but w-what if w-we g-get c-c-caught?


ROBBER 2: {with a sly smile} We won’t. We’ll blast them and they’ll never catch us.


ROBBER 1: {Regaining confidence but still scared} Okay.


(WALK OUT OF FRAME)


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SECOND SCENE: DETECTIVE

(DETECTIVE WALKS INTO FRAME)


DETECTIVE: {Reading a newspaper at his desk}


DETECTIVE: {Realizing that there was a crime} Oh my goodness! Another crime? {looking back at newspaper} Stealing Chromebooks!? I’ve got to solve this!


{DETECTIVE WALKS OUT OF FRAME}


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THIRD SCENE: DETECTIVE AND ROBBERS



{DETECTIVE ARRIVING AT THE CHROME STORE/CRIME SCENE}


DETECTIVE: {muttering} What Happened?


{DETECTIVE KEEPS MUTTERING AS ROBBER 1 AND ROBBER 2 SNEAK UP BEHIND HIM}


ROBBER 2: {Cracks knuckles} Oh I knew you would nose into MY crime!


ROBBER 1: {cautiously} Isn’t it OUR crime?


ROBBER 2: {looks at ROBBER 1, frustrated) SHUT IT ROBBER 1! {Looks back at DETECTIVE} Now, you better cry out your last words before I give you a whoopin’!


ROBBER 1: Yeah you better!


{DETECTIVE RAISES HIS HANDS AND TURNS AROUND}


DETECTIVE: Okay, you got me. I surrender. And Mama, I’m sorr…. {Grabs chest and goes into a fake cardiac arrest}


ROBBER 1: Well, that was kinda easy.


ROBBER 2: Yeah. well, let’s go.


{ROBBERS 1 and 2 WALK AWAY}


DETECTIVE: {Gets his portable, expandable cage from his belt and throws it at the two robbers} Yeah, well, for one thing, don’t assume anything.


ROBBER 1 AND ROBBER 2: {cage expands around them, enclosing them inside} What the…?


DETECTIVE: Now, let me ask. Where are the..

ROBBER 1 AND 2: {interrupting} 14325 Mischief Ln. N 55342

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